Poor Imp

One can't but admire the chapter titles. "So what?" Sureal quipped back. Quipped is rather redundant with 'back', isn't it? "I swear I didn't fire that mortar, Captain," quirked Sureal, ...

Listen to Stravinsky's Firebird suite as well, if you like. Beautiful music - though again, probably darker than your light-heated poem. IMP

Bravo! bob. ^_^ .

(*laughs* Seriously? I just typed whatever came to me. That's somewhat creepy if it was actually accurate...) Oy...yes, in entire seriousness. ^_^'' And it's very oddl; and a bit neat ...

Tov's rather worried about a sharpened sword in the room. Vaguely. But other than that - now that I'm awake -- Tapping her finger against her lips, the writer turned ...

I looked up "limned." :P You still might want to change the word so it's not so confounded. And hehe! You can be subtle and detached. What you want to ...

Thanks to both of you. ^_^ It is meant to be detached, vague. Perhaps, of course, it's gone almost over the edge...I hoped to reflect the conflict rather than telling. ...

...That really doesn't mean no one needs to answer. Surely more than DD read it - 82 times?

Oy...Sam? It's not going to be whole cast then, is it? ^_~ (Ha - but Will would have to be capitalised, wouldn't he, Snoink? If you were to shoot at ...

hehe How do you get mentioned? You either have got to be in SPEW, Wiggy - or be DQ. ^_~

A critique? No worries at all, DD. ^_^'' Any brief remark is fine as well, You've been busy enough as it is. ^_~ (Livny, Shan...deadlines. #_#)

Ignorant of 'daishi'...ah, SPEW adventures are still sufficiently what they are to be amusing. I mean that it's funny and I'm too tried to to type straight. Oy... Daishi? 0o'

( Chp. 3 ) At this point, DD, you've gotten your tone and voice, plot and character steady enough that mostly I can only search for the small things. ^_^ ...

You're too busy living in Lala Land to take notice, you're too safe You're too protected, you're too sure of yourself I like the repetition in that... It would tie ...

I thought brevity would serve better in this case; we didn't speak much, really just spent the whole six hours walking side by side and enjoying the Village together, aside ...